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"Oy, _____!" called a familiar voice.

_____ turned around to see her friend and long-time crush, Allistor Kirkland, standing with his hands in his pockets. "Oh, hi, Allistor. What's up?"

"The ceilin'," he replied curtly, his shoulders rising slightly as he spoke, then relaxing back to their original position. "Gilbert's havin' a party tonight. You comin'?"

"A party? Sure! I'd love to!" said _____ with a wide smile. She knew that Gilbert's parties were the best around, despite how crazy and out of control they became.

Allistor nodded, making a half-smile. "Great. You want me to pick you up?"

A light shade of pink dusted _____'s cheeks. "Uh. . . sure. Okay. . ."


That night, _____ sat in her living room. She had on black Converse shoes, a plain white shirt, a black leather jacket, and a pair of skinny jeans with the Union Jack painted across the right thigh. With every minute that passed, she became more and more anxious. She wondered if she would finally gain enough courage to tell Allistor how she really felt; she wondered if Allistor would like her fashion sense, or if he would be offended by it, considering that he never really got along with his British brother, Arthur.

Her thoughts were interrupted by the sound of the doorbell. She quickly rose from her seat on her couch and shuffled over to the door. She smiled at Allistor as she opened the door. "Hi, Allistor."

He nodded abruptly. "Ready to go?"

_____ nodded, walking out the door, closing and locking it behind her.

"Nice trousers," said Allistor.

_____ lifted her head up to look at him, a blush forming on her face. "You like them?"

He nodded. "Aye. They kinda remind me of home. I saw the Union Jack everywhere back in Scotland."

"Even more than tartan?"

"Aye," he replied with a growing smile on his face. _____ felt her heart get warmer. She loved to see Allistor smile, even just a little bit. She treasured every one of them-- mostly because he did it so infrequently.

"W-Well, then," started _____. "Shall we go?"



"Everyone!" shouted Gilbert as he stood on a tabletop at the party. "Let's all play Hide-and-Seek!"

_____ pumped her first in the air. "Yes! I am so there!" She looked at Allistor. "You gonna play?"

Allistor made a half-smile. "Why not? Sure, I'm in."

"Okay, guys!" said Gillbert. "Toni, Francis, und I'll be it! GO!"

The three turned around, covered their eyes, and began counting aloud. _____ took Allistor's hand and pulled him along down a long hallway. They pulled into an old storage room, spotting a large footlocker.

"Allistor, over there."

Allistor looked at the footlocker, then at _____, a smirk crawling onto his face. "C'mon." He walked over to the footlocker and opened the lid, removing the few objects inside and setting them to the side, making sure it wouldn't look too conspicuous. He climbed inside and lay flat on his back. "Come on in, lass."

_____ gave a small nod before stepping into the footlocker, laying on her stomach on top of Allistor and closing the lid. She wiggled around a bit to get comfortable.

"Comfy?" he asked.

"Eh?" _____ felt her face heat up. She had never been so close to him before; she had no idea what to do in a situation like this. "Y-Yeah. . . I'm fine. . ."

"Mm," he grunted softly.

Thirty minutes passed by, and the duo were still in the footlocker, still unfound. Being stuck in one position for a long time with nothing to do was practically boring them to tears, and Allistor's hands started to fall asleep. He shook them slightly, raising them up to a closer proximity to _____'s side. He lay them back down, but he still felt antsy.

"Oy, _____?"

"Hm? What is it?"

"Can I try something?"

"U-Uh," she mumbled, confused. "Okay."

Without another word, Allistor pressed his lips to _____'s. ______ froze, shocked at his action, but then relaxed and returned the kiss. The kiss became more intense, and _____ let out a quiet moan as Allistor pulled away from her mouth and began kissing her neck and jawline. Their lips met for one more moment before they both pulled away, panting for air.

"I wanna tell you something, Allistor," _____ breathed out.

"I'm listenin'."

"I. . I-I love you. . ."

Allistor let out a quiet chuckle. "Love you, too, _____."

_____ smiled warmly, happy that her feelings were reciprocated. "You think we should get out of this thing now?"

Allistor nodded. "Aye. It's gettin' stuffy in here."

_____ pushed the lid up, opening it and climbing out. Her face turned bright red as she saw the group of people standing in the doorway, looking in her direction expectantly. The Bad Touch Trio was at the front of the crowd.

"Well," said Gilbert with a smirk. "That was interesting."
Here's Scotty's~! Though they're not technically stuck in the box, but oh, well....

I apologize if Scotty seems out of character. I never really delved into his character much, only taking time to take a look at him to write this...

-Germany's: [link]
-Prussia's: [link]
-Spain's: [link]
-England's: [link]
-Italy's: [link]
-America's: [link]
-Romano's: [link]

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EikoChan27 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Allistor: Oy! You'd better run 'cus Emily here is going to kick your--
Me: *Covers Allistor's mouth with my hand* Shushieeees-!!!
Gilbert: Make sure to do that for me next time *winks*
Allistor: Now you better-- *Walk-runs toward Gilbert, but Emily stops him, grabbing his waist*
Me: *Blushes at the silence* D-Don't hurt anyone n-now...
Antonio&France: Ohoho~
Zumtimezfeelinkindum Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Student General Artist
Me: *hides behind allistor* w-we weren't doing anything! Go away! Shut up!
2p me:ain't getting any of this, b*tches! *leaves the room LIKE A BOSS* *slams door behind her*

my 2p is frightening... I wish I had her courage!

seriously, one of my favorite fanfics, I love it!
+1 fav for this!
Raaaiiindrops Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Everyone's doing it so...

1p! Me: ... 1...
Prussia: Oh, please no.
1p! Me: ...2...
France: She's counting, run!
1p! Me: ... 3...
-everybody hides except me and Scotland-
1p! Me: ... -still has her usual sadistic stare-

2p! Me: ... Does hiding in a footlocker cheating?? ((Oh, God, seriously! My 2p is so dense.))

((I really don't have a thing for Scotland, but I thought my OC can be shipped with anybody else especially England.

Oh, well. 
CometFire21 Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, everyone else is doing it, so I might as well.

1P! Me: *hides behind Allistor, blushing like mad* W-w-we did n-n-nothing! *starts speaking rapidly under my breath so no one knows what the hell I'm saying*

2P! Me: *flips everyone off and leaves the room while smirking*

(Great story by the way!)
AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*drinking Pepsi* *sees that ending line*

*choking noises*
Hetaliaiskewl Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
1p!me: *Screams then runs*
2p!me: You three men are going to have an axe in your face
amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Student General Artist
1p Me: IT'S NOT WAT IT LOOKS LIKE! BLAME THAT SOCK! *Points to Ludwig's *thingy* stash* Joon: Bitch Please Im Fabulous XD  *Walks out*
2p Me: You all have 3 milliseconds to run before I shove Ludwig's *thingy* stash up your f*cking asses, but not you Toni, your ass is too fabulous to die Nikes Dat Ass Emote 
Jett1038 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Both 1p and 2p me: you three have five seconds to run until I stick my scythe/bullets so far up your asses you won't be able to fuck.
1p: hides behind hair, hoping to be invisible                                            2P: You got a problem?! *dark aura*
Dema-chan132 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014   Writer
1p me: *Takes of glasses and pulls out a bat* You all have to the count of 3 to scream, 3.

2p me: *smirks put on sunglasses, flips everyone the birdie and walks away*
novadragonheart81 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
Me: *gains black aura*
You. Saw. Nothing.

2p!: I-it was n-nothing! I swear! We were!

pfft, second player role reversal much?
IreneTheAwesome Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  Hobbyist
That's probably what me and my 2P would be XD
novadragonheart81 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015
I left this comment ages ago and I'm disgusted at how attention-grabbing my younger self is and I want to bludgeon her with a lead pipe and asdfghjkl


A-Lonley-Bird Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
1p me : this was all a dream and you will forget about it in the morning *puts on fairy costume and prances out of the room*
2p me : dont worry guys he didnt go that far on me... But maybe i did :iconprussiaumadplz:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I Love this
xXOneHellOfAGamerXx Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
1P: I-it Isn't What It L-looks Like!
2P: *Puts On Sunglasses* It's Exactly What It Looks Like.
A-Lonley-Bird Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:icondatassplz: :iconprussiaumadplz: exactly
Akimoto-Michiyo Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Since everyone else is doing this I'll join the bandwagon...

1p: O-oh. Um...hi? *blushes and hides behind Scotland*

2p: *smirks at them* problem?
Creampuff-ski Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
I'll kick their asses especially the fuckin BTTCURSE YOU! 
LightAndDarkness24 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
1p! *Ireland* (Cheerful, artsy, witty, short-tempered, stubborn) Oh you FRICKING~!
2p! *Ireland* (Shy, quiet, easily pushed around) W-why would you do that?! D:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014   General Artist
Me: ILL WAFFLE YOUR FACES!!!! -takes out waffle iron and chases after the Trio and other people waving my waffle iron ferociusly- 
awesomesauce8453 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
This one is my faaaavorite ☺️
aylastehr Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
My 1p reaction: ze fuck?
My 2p reaction: *cute smile* my turn to count. *pulls out pipe* you have 5 seconds.
Sometimes I think I'm my 2p and not the original. Oh vell.
ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
1p! Reaction to end:

Um... THE FUCK! Why are you here!? Leave b4 I get my synth! Omg *blushes* I hate you all.....
Gilbert: keskeskeskes little Airien(Alaska) is blushing!
1p!: ...shut up Gilbert or I will lock you in a closet with Russia...(1p! Is very imaginative and sorta funny. She is sorta stubborn, mostly out going, and has a thing for Russia, Japan(sorta),China(sorta), Prussia(sometimes), Italy(both), England(depending on story or feeling)) 1p!: *blushes at the mention of Russia* is he here? I want to see him.......

2p! Reaction to end:

.......*blushes deep red* you have 2 seconds before I go murder you all for listening......
Gilbert: keskeskeskes. Zen vhy are you blushing?
2p!: I AM NOT FUCKING BLUSHING YOU FUCKING IDIOT!!!! (2p!is a bit tsured [think that's how you spell it] more stubborn, murderous, love pyro stuff, has a thing for Japan because he is almost the opposite of her) 2p! : I DO NIT HAVE A THING FOR JAPAN!!!!!
JazzyLick Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Since people are doing this...

Le 1P Me's Reaction: Ohhhh just-just-GO WAI. *le hide behind Scotland*

Le 2P Me's Reaction: ICH WERDE EUCH ALLE VERDAMMT KILL! *cat hiss*
zevranarainai1 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
bahahaha I love that ending! God I can just imagine what was going on through everyone's minds when they saw them come out of there together. I would love to be one of them standing out there to tease the the f*ck out of them 
OtakuGirl1029 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Me: *sees crowd* ...

Gilbert: well,that was interesting.

Me: Yes.Yes it was.

WolfLover0925 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

KuroNeko870 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student General Artist
1P Me's Reaction: When did you get in here?!
MewLilla Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student
ur 2p :iconwin-plz:
Igy-of-Prussia Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I will go With the 2p
sexy-fem-scotland Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
I'd go with 2p
shadedarkus Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
i agree with 2p.
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I like your 2p :3
KuroNeko870 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Well, it's true, and Thank you! Meow :3  :iconknifeplz: that's the knife! >:3
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
KuroNeko870 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
>:3 Let's just hope the portal to the 2P world is not open....One sec...*Calls England*
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Lets hope not XD my 2p is a goody goody
KuroNeko870 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
It depends...Your 2P version would be the EXACT opposite of you so....yeah..probably not...
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
She is my exact opposite.

I'm not exactly nice
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IRESP13 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
You saw nothing *sinks back in box and closes lid* DON'T MIND ME I'M JUST A BOX OF TOMATO'S XD
KuroNeko870 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
That's what I would do! XDD :icontomatoesplz:
XxSasukesMinexX Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
SamTheNaziZombie Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Me: You didn't see anything....*slowly closes the box again and makes noises just to be funny*
KandiKane1719 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
*ninja mode*
Konakona321 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
1P Me's Reaction: When did you get in here?!
UNDEADCHESHIRE Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
TheCompleteSaga Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
creek17 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
*nose starts to blead and face plants on the ground. Is now fainted.*
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Once again. Nosebleed.
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